MetalSun Vat WRartifact

hi, this is my first public deck ! please comment wisely ! :) ive been thinking of a combo involving artifact destruction and my permanent protection via liquimetal-manic vandal-indomitable archangel ... sun titan target : woo, ratchet bomb, maniac vandal, kor skyfisher, mimic vat, liquimetal coating, pilgrim eyes mimic vat target : sun titan, inferno titan, precursor golem, manic vandal, woo, and of course, opponent big crit. removal : doj, ratchet bomb, turning every permanent into artifact via liquimetal and destroying them with vandal. also, shrouding every permanent i control with liquimetal and indomitable archangel. eldrazi monument come in to cover my own mass removal and its fuelled by precursor golem and vat copied stuff or sun titan recurred crit. please comment, and remeber me when this deck goes tier1 !!! :)